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高分句式三——并列修辞
  请大家欣赏历史上最精彩的三个并列修辞句式：
  凯撒：I came, I saw, I conquered.
  (我来了，我看到了，我征服了。)
  培根：Studies serve for delight, for ornament, and for ability.
  (学习可以怡情，可以博采，可以长才)考研英语写作名师之作
  林肯的政治抱负：a government of the people, by the people and for the people.
  (民有，民治，民享的政府)
  历史上，名人使用并列修辞写出了千古名句，流芳百世；今天，我们也可以使用并列修辞写出精彩句式，创造作文高分奇迹。
  并列修辞的写作要领：
  用and或者or 连接两个词性相同，意思相近的单词，就构成了并列修辞。
  比如：give support and assistance to…
  …benefit from the education and instruction.
  …develop and promote the economic growth.
  并列修辞实战举例：
  1)The American girl，dressed in traditional Chinese costume and ornaments，indicates and symbolizes the multinational communication of cultures and customs.(选自2002年考研作文真题，一句话包含三处并列修辞)
  2)It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate the young. Let’s take a closer look at the drawings. In an ideal condition, the flower blooms. But when moved out of the green house, it perishes under the rain and storm. It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse can’t withstand wind and rains.(选自2003年考研计算机考研作文真题，一个段落包含四处并列修辞)
  “亮点句式”是考研阅卷人定档次，给分数的主要凭据，所以同学们应该有意识的多训练自己“亮点句式”的写作。如果能将本文介绍的“三大亮点句式”天衣无缝地设置在考研作文当中，整篇作文就会看起来“星光闪闪”“炫人眼目”，那么，获得高分也就是水到渠成事情了。预祝同学们金榜题名！

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